I am a student at St. Bernadette's School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 8 August 2018
God Is Like
Are class today did something for RE we had to make a DLO the title had to be God is like so I hope you like it
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Kia ora Niamh. I really love how you have created a DLO that shows us how God is present to you within your life. I find that he is present in my life in many of those ways. I also love how you have said that we are all created in God's image and that we all fit in. I think that is very true and something that we all need to remember. My only advice would be to make sure that you have got capital letters in the correct place and re-read to make sure it makes sense to us readers. I love the colours you have used, it gives it a calming effect. Ka pai Niamh!
ReplyDeleteMorning Miss Holland it's Niamh here thank you for your comment it is helpful and I will put punctuation and I will re-read it . How is god present in your life thank you?
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