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W.A.L.T investigate how to plan a good story. Our activate is we had to choose a thing like this I chose man/girl vs society. We had to include characters, setting, problem and solution.

Once in a Orphanage this girl called Poppy she was nice she had pink hair and a pink dress and black shoes. Poppy had friend called Flower, Sunshine, Turtle and bob. Flower has a flower necklace and hat. The dress and shoes are yellow. Sunshine is all yellow with some suns all over her dress. Turtle has a shell and is kind of scaly. Bob is chubby and fat he is so big. There are 2 teachers one is soooooooooooooooo mean, she is called Mrs Burgan she has black hair and she has a black and gray dress. There is another teacher that is sooooooooooooo kind she has blond hair and wears a black dress, flowey and wheres white sneakers. Poppy and her friends woke up in the dusty wooden bed. Poppy had all bits over her because the bed bugs bit her. Mrs Burgan said breakfast is in the next room we all went in to the next room. We saw the food we all looked at each other and we said eeeewwww there was raw octopus, rotten fruit, pigs brains and for drink it was elephant's blood, and humans spit. Everyone passed they went outside and huddled and, whispered but but before they could miss Holland came. Miss holland said we need a plan to get rid of mrs burgan have a plan we can go into the kitchen and bob you can distract Mrs Burgan. Then poppy flower and turtle go and get a knife and stab Mrs Bugan.OK OK. We have to do this at night ok just play and do normal stuff you know ……. It was night time poppy, and her friends got up and bob walked into the kitchen and disracked Mrs Bugan poppy and her friends got a knife but then Mrs Burgan saw poppy in the corner of her eye and got ready and shaped her knife and stabbed poppy in the tummy and all of poppies spirit went to Mrs Burgan, Mrs Bugan had poppy was acting like poopy everyone went to bed and the next day. They had a plan to kill Mrs Burgan everyone get a knife and killed Mrs Burgan and all of poppy’s spirit made poppy everyone was sooooo happy and for Mrs Burgan she was dead and at the pizza place.(HELL) BY NIAMH