Smart Commenting

 Hi everyone,

Today we had to finishing are books about Scammers,what a good comment is and how to carry on a conversation. We used this program called Book creator and this is were we go the Info

What I know about a spam comment is that if you get a comment that says like (I love this web site can see more) This is a spam click into their profile and if their name is unknown and if they dont have a school blog or not a proper one this is a scam, you need to report this to a teacher or you can click on them and report them.

Click here to view my book

Here is what the cover looks like 

I liked book creater because it is very easy to use no trouble it is very simple 

What I found hard was writing about it because I dint realy know what to put 

How do you think I did?

 

Pirate Ship going down

 Hi everyone,

This week I have been working on my writing witch is based around Pirates.

Our class had to write a dairy about a sinking ship that we are on. 

We has to use our senses like ( see, smell, feel and hear) 

The class can add in Pirate Language but it has to make sense

Hope you like it!!!

BOOM

The wooden boards are creaking,

waves striking on the side of the boat,

thunder and the wind travel through one ear and out the other.

 I can smell salty water and split rum,

I feel my wet feet slipping off a board and onto another

I am feeling worried and panicky, terrified and afraid.

 I can see rain and barrels of food floating in the water

and the night sky, water everywhere,

ripped sails,

terrified pirates shouting at one another and dead bodies floating in the water.

Don't think I can take it.

I am going to die,

taking a trip to Davy Jones' locker is the last thing

I’m worried about.

If you are reading my diary

I hope this is not the last of me...

The hard thing was making a pictures in the readers head. 

The eases thing is all the senses.

Do you think I did good?

Blog Commenting

What  know about blog commenting is that

1.  It has to be positive and nice words and thoughts

2.  You have to ask them a question (like how much time did you work on this activity)

3. Or ask them what they could improve on 

4. You may write what you liked

5. You always have to have a greeting or your name 

Last week we learnt how to put a link into a comment.

<a href="insert URL here">Insert display text here</a>

Where it says insert URL here, you delete it and paste the link.

where it says Insert display text here, you delete and write what you want to write what you want to say e.g '' Click here to listen/watch/read''

Can you leave me a comment with a link? Have a try!

Help Wanted

Hi everyone,

This week I have been writing with my buddy Olivia. We worked on a Help Wanted poster. My buddy and I have made a pirate. We had to persuade people to come and work on our ship called the laid back Larry, which is Olivia. My pirate is the captain of the ship called Jack Cannon. I hope you like it.

The hardest part was try to make the whole thing make sense.

The easiest thing was choosing the background 

How do you think my buddy and I did?

Do you like it?

What do you think Olivia and I  should work on?